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The
Theory of the Brochure
"Wild
Bill"
During
the summer months my family and I do quite a bit
a traveling. That's what gave me the idea for this
article. What's the number one, most-read advertising
medium on vacation? Yes, you're correct, it's the
"Brochure"! Being an advertising fanatic in the purest
sense and for the pure entertainment value, I started
studying and comparing these Gems of the Advertising
World. You can take the boy out of the marketing, but
you can't take the marketing out of the boy.
The cover is everything!
Whether
it's a magazine on the rack or the front of a
box of cereal, the cover has a great deal to do with
your conscience choice to look inside. The same holds
true for your business brochure. It still shocks me to
see how many business owners waster such a valuable
piece of real estate as the front cover of their life's
blood. But still I see so many that adorn them with
nothing more than a fancy graphic, a company logo or
the product name, hoping that someone will read their
message. In today's competitive advertising world, that
just doesn't cut it.
The
most popular (successful) approach is to treat your
brochure cover like the headline of your ad copy. It
can present a strong sales message, enticing the reader
to look inside. Although, the ability to use fancy
graphics definitely adds to the promotional value of
the brochure, the key is the same as any other
advertisement. It's all in the "words" baby!
Another
successful method is the "Once upon a time"
approach. Meaning, use the cover with the first few
"hard-hitting" lines of a story, with very graphic
images of the message you are trying to get across. A
real example I seen recently: The cover leads you in
with an awful photo depicting a starving child, with
only 6 words "You can help save a life". In this
instance, many will open the brochure out of sorrow,
guilt or disgust. But no matter why, something about
the photo with those few simple words drew me to open
the brochure and look inside.
Get it all in there!
When
designing your brochure, you must know ahead of
time all the pertinent information you need to include.
Don't begin designing until you list all the facts that
must be presented. I actually found a brochure for a
petting zoo with no address. Great photo work,
excellent ad copy, and no way to find it. I have to ask
myself how much they flushed over this one. Well,
here's a checklist of things not to forget when you
design yours.
Did
you include your "Email Address", "Website URL",
"Credit Cards You Accept", "Phone & Fax Numbers",
"Address & Location", "Days & Hours of Operation",
"Business Name", "Logo or Trademark", "Guarantee",
and "Copyrights & Disclaimers". These hardly cover
all
the items that should be on your list, but enough to
make you think about what you could be missing.
Like a river, your copy should flow...
Earlier,
I made reference to opening the brochure with
the method of opening lines leading into a story, when
in fact all brochures should tell a story. Treat the
making of a brochure like writing a short story. It
needs a beginning, middle and an end. The brochure
needs to proceed logically and smoothly from one sales
point to the next. A good copywriter has an arsenal of
"connection phrases" to jump from one subject to the
next, while keeping the text brief. Do you have your
arsenal ready? "For Example", "Most importantly",
"For Instance", "By Comparison", "On the
other hand",
"What's more", "Even better", "Even Worse"
and "In
other words" are all great examples of connection
phrases. These phrases are only one way to keep the
flow going. Read, re-read and read again. Look for
awkward sentences that disrupt the flow of your
advertising story. Keep it smooooooooth...
Benefits & Details are important.
You've
seen them, you've read them, but did you buy
them? Two of the top copy mistakes I see in brochures
are the problem some copywriters have of introducing
and defining product benefits.
First,
when you describe your product, show how the
product will benefit the reader; don't simply list the
features. All products have features. Chances are there
are several products, if not 100's or 1000's of them
that have the same features. If you were given the
choice between an amusement park with a "picnic area"
or one with a "clean, relaxing, wooded area for
dining", which would you want?
When
reading a brochure, or any other advertising for
that matter, we need as much information as possible.
When you have the availability of facts make use of
them. Why say you have a "Great Roller Coaster", when
you can say "5000 feet of the fastest track in the
world". If you know the facts, use them to your
benefit.
Personal, Positive and Alive!
When
writing your copy direct your text at the reader.
Keep it on a personal level in the first and sometimes
second person. "Do you", "have you", or "will
you" all
make reference to you! That's right "you" and those
close to you are the people you worry about. Direct
your information like a gun barrel aimed at the reader.
Make sure there is no mistake that it is they of whom
you speak. Your goal is to keep your copy in such
conversational text that the reader is actually
answering questions aloud. Yes, That's Me!
The
simple things are the most often missed. When
proofing your copy make sure that you walk away with a
positive feeling about the brochure and the product. If
something strikes you negatively, even a little, fix
it! If you see it in that light, imagine what the
average reader will pick up from it!
Storytelling
is a powerful aspect of the brochure. If offers you the chance to
bring your product alive. You can do more than simply hit them with
a few lines of attention grabbing words and phrases. Writing copy
for a brochure gives you the chance to be personal and create images
of thought. You don't have the quick and limited barriers of other
advertising, such as the 5- line ad or the 30-second commercial.
You have time to bring your reader into your world and back again.
On the other hand, the length can be a foe for those who can't grasp
the theory of the brochure.
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